His shoulders are too broad. His arms are too muscular. He looks like he's going to eat you're dog. And he looks too old. Justin is suposed to have a young boyish apearence because of the age he became a death scyth. Watch the anime read the book I don't car just get it right.
I drew him in my style with my own modification on how I would like to see him. I wasn't trying to draw him the way they drew him, rather then copy that style I stayed true to MY style, artists don't copy, they interpret.. Let me off with a warning, art police.
Alright next time state that it's your style in the description box. Even though no one really reads it you can still say you put it on there X3. I will still hold true to my rating until I see more of your work. How's that.
Are you kidding me? REALLY? SERIOUSLY?? Where do you get off telling someone how to draw around here? You aren't an artist for the Soul Eater program. You don't financially fund the Soul Eater series. I would imagine that you can't afford stock in the production company that funds Soul Eater. So what difference should it make to you how he drew this? Leave him alone.
The whole point of Deviant Art is for artist to showcase THEIR artistic abilities which from looking at your gallery is a skill you have not yet mastered. People whom have artistic ability light years better than ours have looked at his art at conventions such as C2E2, Wizard World, and Anime Central and given him props for it. I know because I was there. You don't go around trashing other artists like it's your full time job. If it is, you seriously need to reevaluate the priorities in your life. You owe him an apology.